Wednesday, November 7, 2012

Increasing Your Book’s Momentum

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Momentum: Getting Your Story up and Running
Because many of you are furiously working away at your manuscripts, today I wanted to discuss an aspect of your book that you may not be concentrating on, momentum. Perhaps you’ve had someone read your book and tell you it was a bit slow. Once you managed to get past the devastating blow to your pride, you told them that they just needed to keep reading; they’d get to it soon enough. Right?


We live in a world where we get upset if a webpage does not load within ten seconds. We have social networks to update our statuses instantly, and we can access our global village from any place in the world. We are not patient.

Perhaps a few decades ago this was different, but since the Internet, the world’s collective attention span has atrophied. Writers cannot expect their readers to patiently wait for their book to start. No, you must begin your story with a bang, or take the chance of losing reader interest.

So today I will discuss what momentum is, where it is important, what slows down and speeds up a book’s momentum, how to identify areas of fast and slow momentum, and ultimately how you can fix these problems.

What is “Momentum”?
I define momentum as the aspects of your book that generate reader excitement. Throughout a story the momentum fluctuates, but the most momentum occurs in those areas where readers cannot set aside the book—they must find out what happens.

Where in the Book is Momentum Important?
Technically, momentum is important everywhere in your story, but there are a few key places where momentum is absolutely vital.

The Beginning
Hands down the most important area is the very beginning of your book. Why? Readers often read the first few pages of a book before committing to it. And because huge booksellers like Amazon allow readers to preview the first few pages, many times committing to a book is synonymous to buying it. The stakes are high; if you cannot pique your readers’ interest here, then you risk losing readers, and ultimately, money.

Agents and editors usually look for the same thing. If the book does not begin with a bang, then they’ll pass. After all, they’re investing in you. They want to reduce their risk by making sure your product sells instantly. I cannot stress enough how important it is to hook readers in these pages.

Another area where momentum is important is the end of each chapter. This is so well known that we have a name for it, “cliffhangers.” Chapters mark convenient stopping points for the reader, but if you can end a chapter with a cliffhanger, chances are they won’t be able to put the book down.

What Increases and Decreases the Momentum?

Things that Decrease Momentum

Long-winded monologues will scare off interested readers. Anywhere in your book where these occur you should seriously consider thinning them out. However, at the beginning of your book, these should occur in clusters of at most a couple of sentences. Anything more and the reader will fear that this is the tone of the book and quickly abandon it.

Perhaps the most tempting and most lethal way to begin a story is to include a lot of description. It’s a quick kiss of death for books because most industry insiders consider lengthy descriptions to be a sign of an amateur writer.

It’s also a waste of your time because most readers are more impressed by plot twists and character development than they are your description of a pretty sunset. In addition, every person as his or her own idea of what a beautiful sunset looks like. You’ll save face and a lot of time if your give readers only enough description for them to fill in with their own ideas.

Boring Scenes
This is a hard reality to swallow. Most writers enjoy much of what they write, so they often believe that every scene is exciting in some way. Please take a step back and look closely at your beginning scenes. If you are introducing Ma and Pa’s little farm, and a warm conversation your main character has with them, this is boring. Readers thrive on conflict. Inserting conflict in place of cooperation will do wonders for your book’s momentum.

Things that Increase Momentum

Exciting Scenes
In opposition to boring scenes, exciting scenes jumpstart a book’s momentum. Exciting scenes are not necessarily shootouts, but they do involve conflict and/or intrigue. These are especially great at the beginning of your book because they can conveniently introduce the book’s main conflict, and they pique reader interest.

These are also great fodder for cliff hangers for the same reason—they introduce conflict and intrigue. Readers are curious; if a scene ends uncertainly, or poses a question that requires an answer, the reader will want to read on. The best books are often those where each chapter ends this way. I’m sure you know the type of book I’m talking about; these are the books that require us to stay up late to finish.

Where description can lose reader interest, dialogue often increases reader interest. This is because in dialogue, things are happening; events are unfolding. The character is sleuthing, asking questions, confronting the antagonist, discussing the problem, and deciding on solutions. When paired with conflict and exciting scenes, dialogue can be an incredibly powerful tool used to reel readers in.

How to Identify where the Momentum is Slow?
Take a look at the length of your paragraphs. Are they thin, or full of information? It might surprise you, but usually smaller paragraphs indicate more momentum because events are unfolding so quickly the main character does not have time to stop and describe or think deeply about a problem.

How to fix Momentum?
Ideally, you want to begin your story at the moment there is one. Don’t wait fifty pages for your story to begin. Start immediately. This means that you’ll want to insert dialogue and exciting scenes as soon as possible. Save the lengthy explanations and description for later. Remember, readers like conflict and questions. Start here, and they won’t be disappointed.

The Caveat
While momentum is important, you must not completely remove thoughts and description. During exciting scenes, it’s important to include some details and some of the main character’s thoughts. After all, the latter is considered “voice,” and lots of readers like characters with voice. In addition, once an exciting scene is finished, readers want to know how the main character feels.

Momentum is a vital to increasing readership and ultimately marketing your book. It is most important at the beginning of your manuscript and at the end of each chapter. Thoughts, description, and boring scenes can slow down a book’s momentum, while dialogue and exciting scenes can speed it up. You can identify areas of fast and slow momentum by looking at the paragraph length. And lastly, while thoughts and description can slow down a book’s momentum, they are necessary in moderation.


  1. Can I just say that I love your blog? I'm in the process of revising my book (again), and your tips have been really helpful!

    Thanks a lot :)


  2. Thank you so much Leila! Responses like yours make my day and reinforce my hope that these posts are helping writers! Good luck with the edits!

    Happy writing,

  3. I wish I had a 45,000 word manuscript so I could enter the Holiday Giveaway! Do it again next year, and maybe I'll have something by then :) Your blog is motivating, and I especially liked this one about momentum.

    1. Thank you Ann! I’m so glad to hear this is getting you excited about writing! And I always love hearing affirmation that my posts actually encourage my readers. Thank you for your kind words!

      Happy writing,